While this is a good high-level summary, we'd like a little more elaboration/supporting evidence regarding the justification section.
In particular, we're looking for a little more elaboration on how his loyalties have grown. While understanding the stakes and improving group morale may be part of it (even an important part!), we're interested in the more specific character motivations, such as what he wants or hopes to achieve in the future and how growing closer to Meridian reflects that. Tiering up is a more concious activity as you move up the ranks, so what about Meridian's goals appeals to him enough to want to fight more for its cause? This may be a matter of wording, but we just find this summary a little non-specific for Claude in particular.
Also, just to note, we do want to see how this has been reflected in play rather than just answering this question here through text alone, if that makes sense!
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In particular, we're looking for a little more elaboration on how his loyalties have grown. While understanding the stakes and improving group morale may be part of it (even an important part!), we're interested in the more specific character motivations, such as what he wants or hopes to achieve in the future and how growing closer to Meridian reflects that. Tiering up is a more concious activity as you move up the ranks, so what about Meridian's goals appeals to him enough to want to fight more for its cause? This may be a matter of wording, but we just find this summary a little non-specific for Claude in particular.
Also, just to note, we do want to see how this has been reflected in play rather than just answering this question here through text alone, if that makes sense!